The insomnia continued all night and I got NO rest last night. Yet this morning I did manage to revise my story – which is now, with page breaks and some edits, twenty-eight pages of solid writing. Solid by which I mean solid prose. In the end, I realized in the reread that it was a liiiiiiittle too derivative of other things I’ve read/watched before and will probably need a good brushing to get all the ‘reminds me too much of’ away from it.
In the meantime though… yikes. Twenty-eight pages in a very short period of time. And it’s not bad either! A solid short story in one sitting. I’m really proud of this one.
Though… heh, one problem? Main character’s name? Javi. Main girl? Nava. Na+vi = AVATAR. That movie is too much in my head. Name changes ahoy!